"Where am I?" I questioned myself. As I looked around, I felt like I was being followed. I had never seen such a strange looking house before. I slowly crept towards the house hoping I wouldn't make a sound. Words rushed through my mind asking me if I should step back or take a risk. So I made a wise decision. Suddenly out of nowhere, the door slammed shut! My whole body started trembling. Every step I took, made me more curious. I had no other choice, so I sprinted inside the mysterious building as it felt more safe than being alone outside trapped in the darkness. The lights kept switching on and off. I only took a short glance around the room. The room was blank...
This is a short recount that Halatoa and I wrote. Our task was to take turns in writing a sentence each about the picture above. This helped us with writing a proper recount which we will be doing in a few weeks. I found this very interesting because I had never done anything like this before and it gave us a good chance to work with people we have never worked with before!
A superb example of collaboration Sajiha and Halatoa! You have painted a clear picture with your words. I really like the phrase...'I questioned myself', it's a powerful way of writing 'I thought'.
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