This is my presentation of Stretching Sentences. My task was to use the 5 W's in a sentence to help make it more complex and detailed. I enjoyed learning this because this can help me improve in my sentences when I am doing a writing assessment.
I have read your stretching sentence DLO... To me I think that using the 5 w's to make your sentences to read more interesting and fascinating. But there is one mistake... I couldn't quite read the sentences because it was to small and that it was in a different colour. So next time can you at least think about... Keep up this amazing Sajiha your doing awesome...
Hi Sajiha,
ReplyDeleteI have read your stretching sentence DLO... To me I think that using the 5 w's to make your sentences to read more interesting and fascinating. But there is one mistake... I couldn't quite read the sentences because it was to small and that it was in a different colour. So next time can you at least think about... Keep up this amazing Sajiha your doing awesome...
Your Sincerely,
June